The Mentor's is repeating the word kids through out the story and he chose to use this word instead of using children, which is a more formal word. The Mentor's tone makes him seem like he is annoyed with what is going on since he keeps using the word damn. The author seems annoyed with the way teachers do things such as if they don't see that you showed your work, you won't get credit and he seems tired of hearing the same things over and over again. The words the mentor decides to use show how inclusive he is because he varies the words he uses instead of simply sticking to the same phrases/words.
I couldn't really hear you that much in all honesty, but from what I could hear you managed to answer the questions confidently. You also seemed really prepared, good job!
ReplyDeleteYou dressed for success, I loved your responses. Great Job Angela!!!
ReplyDeletei liked how you were very confident and answered every question thoroughly.
ReplyDeleteYou were really elaborative with each response you had. Don't be afraid to speak up because I did have trouble hearing at times. Overall, I enjoyed your interview!
ReplyDeleteYou calmly and confidently answered all the questions but spoke a little quietly however still a really great job!
ReplyDeleteI liked how your responses were long and very interesting. Well I enjoyed hearing your responses but maybe be a little louder . Overall Good!
ReplyDeleteEven when a marker was thrown the interview didn't stop! You pushed through, great focus!!!
ReplyDeleteJob well done Angela you did really good and had strong responses. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou were a bit quiet. However, you seemed confident in yourself and I liked your outfit. Pretty interesting career and pretty interesting answers as well.
ReplyDeleteFirst things first, love your dress! It was very professional and pretty! To add on,your responses were detailed and insightful! The only critique I have or you is just to speak with more volume.
ReplyDeleteYou dressed very professionally, calm voice, very passionate and continued with the conversation even after the incident.
ReplyDeleteYou were very passionate with your responses and seemed overall very calm and focused. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you dressed professionally and you did well.
ReplyDeleteI loved your outfit. You did great you were very calm and you answered everything although you seemed really nervous.
ReplyDeleteGood Job! I liked your response. You could speak a little louder though. Just a little
ReplyDeleteGood job on not getting distracted and continuing the interview.
ReplyDeleteGreat, you were calm and poised but you were a little quiet. You had some good answers but it feels negated by how quiet it was. Honestly just work on your voice and that'd be all, well done.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job! You were well dressed. You seemed really confident and calm. Speak a little louder but other than that you did great.
ReplyDeleteYou were confident, you looked calm like this was a normal conversation.
ReplyDeleteYour responses were clear and calm in all honesty it was difficult to hear you ,but besides that you did amazing!
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